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Presentation feedback

For these , i put myself forward to put the presentations together for the crit/pitch session with the tutors and 2nd years.

After our first presentation/pitch, we received quite a bit of feedback that we have taken on board and are going to tackle the suggested changes to the designs to ensure that there is a consistency and to make the concept strong for the final pitch.

the feedback comments were mainly focused on the inconsistency of the theme throughout the promotional work and the video that was put together.

it was said that the video held the clear theme of the stock market and the wall street route that we want to take the exhibition down.

However, from the feedback, they stated that the promotional work lacked the fun of the video and didn't demonstrate the theme. 

This is something that we need to have another look at to see how we can bring in areas of the video in to the designs. 

It was also said that we need to consider the opening night and the exhibition space more as this was not something we had previously spent much time on therefore was not documented in the pitch.

We set to regroup after the weekend and look back through the experiments that we have done to see how we can make the designs stronger, taking into consideration the feedback comments.